cRAVE01's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peace and Calm]

like that flute

mebe vary the speed of the glitching at different parts of the song. other than that, its enjoyable. Something about the flute reminds me of the Jurrasic Park game back on the Super NES ^=^;

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

There was a Jurassic Park game for the SNES?

Thanks for the review!

[~)F.D.(~ "forest of life"]

Breath-taking

When those strings came in . . . I wanted to cry. Its beautiful! You are a master of your craft.

aspachi responds:

You are a Wonderful Reviewer! :D

[Man and Machine]

WOW

this one left me pretty speechless . . . o_o once it really gets started . . . its beautiful. Uber-kudos on putting this together

CyrusOfNaias responds:

Eh, I didn't arrange it very well. It was one of my first originals.

This was when I knew much less about FL, but I appreciate your kudos!

[Into the Fire +2!]

YEY its longer!

its longer and you arranged it very well. Most notably I like the slow-down you've got at 1:12 and the build up after. very nice ^--^ I love lots!

I'll agree with the last guy . . . I am not crazy about opening with the guitar as you did . . . I wouldn't say get rid of them, but maybe save the instrument you used in the last version and intro the guitar a little later in the song. Or maybe save them for points of emphasis, like at 0:24, 0:34, you get the idea. Do give the drums and such a little bit more spotlight. they are crying for love TT~TT

I see where you were going with the last 5 seconds looping, and I like it, but it didn't work out unfortunately :\ looping it that way is a good idea, so please don't think I am saying get rid of it, but try and work that part out if you have any energy or will to get that part right.

Still have all of the rave-tastic reviews as before for this song! love it a lot. keep up the good work

CyrusOfNaias responds:

Indeed I shall. Your advise is duly noted, though getting exactly what I want to a guy with a real guitar can be a pain sometimes, even when they're right there next to me.

[Iridion 3D - Into the Fire +1]

WOW-ness

WOW. just Wow. You have REALLY expanded upon the original. Really impressive. If this wasn't so short, it's something I'd hope to hear over at OCRemix! I didn't recognize the tune at first (not a bad thing ^_') thinking it was one of the later levels that I always die before I get to ^=^. ANYWAYS! i REALLY like all the effect that you have in the beginning of this one, and that voice that you used, very VERY nice touch. My ear wanted to hear that voice say something again at about :28. and maybe one on :44. The original tune gets overpowered in parts (but that might just be my speakers) and I'm not the biggest fan of how it ends. It sounds like you slapped Kirby dying right at the end . . . kinda sticks out too much. But you ReMixed this so awesomely that it is a minor thing.

PLEASE do lengthen it

CyrusOfNaias responds:

Alright. I'm officially on a mission to redo some of my works, and plan on releasing them in due time.

I WILL lengthen it!