Crap dude
You've only been making music for 6 months you say?! crap, I've been making music for at least 2 years now and your stuff is easily superior. You've got talent dude. Make something of it for yourself or others.
its a nice housy vibe the whole way through, and I really like the effects that you have going on in the begginning. very nice. I really can't think of anything to comment or critique.
10 outta 10 and 5 outta 5