Not bad :-) I have not had a lot of experience in making bit songs, but I don't need that to be able to tell you that what you have here is well composed. It's not overly repetitive, it stays interesting. And your EQ levels sound good to my ears - nothing in conflict with each other.
It makes for a good loop, too!
Hey thanks for checking it out cRAVE! Glad you liked it.
Not bad
It loops great! The crash became very amusing the second time around :-)
well. glad I could amuse you cRAVE01! :P
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This does need some help. tho it does have its fun moment right at :34-35. If you could get the percussions to stay at tempo throughout the song, that would be a big boost to your song's over all experience. Drum and hi hats aside, a simple loop that keeps tempo.
PM me and let me know what program you are working with, and I might be able to share what I know (if you are working with FL, I CAN HELP YOU :D)
WOW
High quality production right here. I know of perfect world, havent seen the video this is for, but it sounds like it would fit great. Very epic and cinematic feel. GOOD JOB! you should be really proud of this. With an impressive show like this, I'm gonna try and check out your other works tomorrow : )
Thanks. To see the video, go to youtube and append the following to the domain /watch?v=1ODIlUpUpC8
It's pretty good
I am loving the vocals in this. A nice rythm you have established. It feels a little empty through-out most of it. Maybe if the reverb was a bit wetter, this would help. I think having a deeper, supporting bass playing throughout would help make it feel fuller also.
But it has great energy, and the vocals are excellent and very fun. Good Job!
Thanks alot for your feedback, very much appreciated. I'll be sure to take everything into account with my next track and see what i can come up with.
Regards,
Ash.
WHO DARED VOTE 0!!!! >B U
HOLY COW! THIS IS AMAZING. ADDICTING. CAPSLOCK INDUCING. MUST. DOWNLOAD. MUST FAV. MUST SPREAD . . . TO . . . FRIENDS.
ok. enough of yelling. great job. great opening. I'll do my best to give this a nice 5 rain in the coming days : )
Seriously, that 0-bomber is gonna get it ...
I KNOW I'll post a song and it will seriously get like four 0's and then it ends up becoming lost in the endless sea of music on page 523 >_> . Thank you btw ^^
Once the kick came in
I started to really enjoy this song. I only wish they could have some in a good 20 seconds earlier. But the sound quality is sounding better in this one. You don't have any clipping from what my ear can discern, and nothing sounds artificial as far as percussions go.
love the part @ 2:31. that is great bass you are developing there : )
Keep it up. I can tell you are getting better, and you have some real potential.
It's lovely
I find a creative outlets always help release backed up feelings and emotions, and I am glad that this is exactly what you've done here.
What's more, is that after weathering this last cold/painful season, you have made something that is tremendously beautiful, hopeful and strong. And for that, you have my praise and respect. : ) proud of you.
That said, some constructive criticism. At the 1:25 transition, I would like to see one or two things. Either an automation fading that new pattern in (be it volume-in or lowpassed in) OR I would like to hear that instrument have just a LITTLE bit more release on it. That part of the song sounds a little harsh, which I feel you might have meaning behind, but I think it woud fit with the song more smoothly and still retain it's energy/harshness with a little more release.
Also, at the 2:00 spot, the pause after the glass is nice, but I think that the song would carry the energy that it has built if the following pattern starts AT the peak of the glass breaking : )
2:29 feels like it could use some EQ work. some instruments sound a little muscled out of the way of your "energy" pattern.
Your instrument choice is lovely through-out. I like the little flute @ :43. feels like it is being played by someone who lives care free and inviting heavy souls to drop their excess and dance with her. Again. You did a great job with this song. keep it up friend.
Thanks for the review friend. I have to reupload this anyways without the cutoff at the end, so I will work after 2:29 and IDK yet, but maybe have the song start right after the glass breaking. Thanks again.
Also, I see what you mean about 1:25. I think I'll go with the release on that.
I am impressed
sound quality is the highest i think I've ever heard from you! seriously, not a big step, but a leap up. Gives me the feeling of slowly working my way through the under-dark and walking amidst the inky monsters that live in the abyss. well done.
It sounds great to me bik. I can't think of any constructive criticisms as I think it's great and complete the way it is!
It goes in the Red, A LOT : (
add a compressor and/or limiter to that Kick and the song shouldn't go into the red so much. I am glad you added point 12, b/c I was about to say it doesn't have a lot of Trance elements except for the kick and arp that you added. Would have liked to have seen more percussive elements and some automations to play with everything. Automating a LP filter on the base would have helped. It is a little monotinous as is. I like the cooldown you have towards the end. Nicely placed and relaxing : ) From what I can tell, your EQ work is pretty decent - altho the kick is so overpowering that its hard to say : /
Overall, NOT BAD, but could do with some spit-shine. Keep it up bro. keep playing with nobs and parameters on the different synths, and look into downloading some VSTs when you get bored with the synth selection FL comes with. There is a WORLD of GOOD FREE synths out there. ok, not trying to advertise there. yeah. Let me know about future trance/techno/vg mixes you make and I'll try to review them : )
Wow!
Thanks for the awesome review.
Thats what i forgot! I knew i left something.
As for the progress, this is just a WIP.
Im sorry about the kick, but i love my kicks overpowering.
Its a habit i should kick, i know :(. But My headphones are so epic in quality, i just cant help myself :). Ill check out some free synths here and there, but i want to experiment with sytrus before i get with that point. The Monotone comes from the bass i had. Im sorry, but i was in a hurry, so i couldnt ear out the bas on the origional. This is far from complete, believe me, but i thanks for the expert advice to help me now!
EDIT: I forgot to tell you, but the kick is like that because of the filter i used.
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