sheer WOW
this certainly would be a sight to see someone play this in person. I can't exactly see the bowser thing . . . : \ but thats not important to enjoying the song (thank goodness ^__^). overall compostion is superb, as well as the constant energy. Something is always goin on, and the great thing - none of it crowds anything else out. So good job on the EQing! The transistions are like butter. A big stick of butta.
In reflecting on the name of the title, it certainly opens up the song, allowing me to "see/hear" which part is which. The tribulation but precision order in the beginning, and of course the lighter, hopeful, happier part at the end - leading on to something better. You certainly nailed the heaven feel on the nose. Even Assasin caught it ^_^
Excellent job! keep it up and don't stop expressing that creative spirit in you!