Audible sweetness ^______^
The one thing I want to start off with saying is how the song starts off the first time and it sounds so beautiful, and then by the time that the song starts the loop, it is the exact same-but it has a different feel and ... dunno how to describe it. It just feels different from the first time it plays through, and its a good different. Scores big points in my book; however, I am going to agree with ViperRodriguez down here in saying "please don't call this done just yet." But I have different reasons behind my saying that. I would like to hear you add your own content to the song in the second-third of the song. Have fun with it. I heard your song "before your time," so i KNOW you are capable of elaborating on a little tune and making it something just as fun and beautiful. Please don't doubt yourself if you are, cuz I believe that you could have a lot of fun with this tune and it turn out great.
What you have hear is great. HIgh marks and enjoyment all around, but to get that 10th point outta me, I wanna see some compositional creativity ^_^