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[Predator Series Preview X]

Predator-not the alien-vs-predator predator

ok. first off, things look really scribbly. The animation could be smoother, there by making the scribbli-ness look even scribblier. I'd reccomend using more tha just red-white-black. I can understand if you are trying to go for an artistic feel. By all means, stick with the artistic feel. But use some shades and tints of red to that the animation doesn't just feel like a moving sribble. Don't give this up, b/c you've got an idea. heheh, the belly-button moved. I don't get why, but it seemed so random it got me to chuckle.

There is a lot of room for improvement, so don't give up.

ADR3-N responds:

The scribbly part was because I really rushed. I'm merely practicing with this. I'll try using shades of red and add more color. The belly buton wasn't supposed to move. lol

[Dance Party Ep. 5]

pointless

only high people will find this entertaining . . . wait . . . no they wont. please put more thought into your flashes BEFORE you submit them. If I wanted to see Mr Bean wiggling to California love (which I wouldn't in the first place) I woulda done it myself.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put more thought into your flashes. You had something with the cat driving a car, and then you did nothing with it. And if flashing "vote 5" was some kind of attempt to subliminally encourage us to "vote 5", it backfired horribly. Sorry this is a really harsh review, but I'm sorry to say your submission is deserving :(

Don't give up, but use more elbow grease

Meth09 responds:

elbow grease lol